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The distant wail of the sirens reverberated through her ears, as she struggled to stand and watch the events taking place before her. She weeped noiselessly, the subtle yet emotional symbols of depression trickled slowly down her face, casting a uneven glint on her light yet powerful complexion. Surrounding her, were a crowd of bustling people increasing by the minute-all straining to do whatever was necessary to find out what all the commotion was about. Slowly, she glanced around only to find unrecognizable faces, all with the face of shock and disbelief as to what they were staring at, while chatting with their friends or unknown strangers to find out the newest information about the event like ladies in a hair salon on a saturday night relaying all their gossip. The street was now covered in a blanket of darkness, obscuring peoples vision as they mindlessly wandered and shoved even closer to the current event. Several cars lined the drive-way, a mirage of different colours surrounded by endless acres of grass, which now resemblanced tyre tracks due to careless drivers. The wail of the sirens, over the past few minutes has increased significantly, and she quickly hesitated to what the polices action would be after they had investigated the current scene. BOOM! The mighty sound echoed across the street and ricocheted off the broad, burly trees resulting in many outcomes: many people rushed out of their houses to see what had created the noise ; it created a air of unsettled ease: and countless high pitched screams and gasps as everyone's eyes were locked and sustained on one target : her house. Her gaze drifted up, and the sight that acknowledged her resulted in her weeping furiously into her own hands. As she slowly started to look, she witnessed it all again. Her one pristine and luxurious house, with spotless white marble wall and delicate chandeliers, accompanied by a garden with exquisite and petite flower, bursting with blossom, casting serenity and peace inside whoever looked at this house, had mercilessly become a dilapidated and burnt house, emblazoned with a fury of one massive fire, engulfing the contents of her home and possessions, not giving a care to who it might affect. Suddenly, the house collapsed again, as a result of the weak and fragile embodiment of the house. Her home for her entire life- destroyed.

Are giants Extraterrestrial?

I was watching something on the History channel that giants are extraterrestrial because there is no one that tall anymore in real life :/ and in the bible how tall was Goliath?

Girls, which piece of jewelry would you choose ?

not the 3rd one unless you can pick what they say. the 1st is really pretty. put her birthstone on one side and urs on the other. the 2nd website is a broken URL, but it says stainless steel, and girls dont usually go for that, it tends to be darker looking.

What's your favorite under rated movie?

My favorite movie is Back to the Future, but a lot of time when I tell my fellow high schoolers, they say that they've never seen it. It ticks me off. Also I like the movie Labyrinth.

GS: Just a Thought But Perhaps a Bad One?

At your age, I felt similarly. And at 16 I started dating someone who was in his 20s, only my dad knew about it and supported the relationship with the condition that my then bf would respect me... (even now at 33, I still usually find older men more interesting.) Age differences as my first relationship are not abnormal in my cultures, as it is (legally) in the US, and other places where you would be a minor. Don't worry, you will have time to date guys you like when you are older, but there is nothing wrong with you. :-)

I've lost all self confidence?

I've never been a particularly confident person, but the lack of ..Is too much. I even get nervous around my parents. What bothers me more than anything Is that I can't sing when I'm like this, literally can't, just a breath comes out.It sounds silly that whether I can sing or not Is my main concern, but music's the only thing I really love, and if i can't do that then I start to doubt everything. If I do try to make myself spend time around other people I end up covering up how insecure I am by insulting them. I don't like the way I act and can only feel OK when I'm mindlessly clicking on the internet or listening to music. I don't want to feel like this anymore,it really is taking its toll, sometimes I can't stand to even be alone with myself. Sorry If I'm whinging, thanks.

How tall do you estimate I will be?

Wow 5'7" at 13m Im bout to be 16 and I'm 5'3" haha damn...and I'm guessin ur gonna be tall